Category: Writers Block
Every step she takes in life she will always be asking you "how many?" And everytime you have to reply it will always be "just a little bit more." You love her and you want her to be the best she can be. From those very first steps to her first grandbaby. And always she will strife to make you proud and a little bit more is what makes her whole like worth living. It will neverr be that you are not proud of her through every struggle those happen and you will be there with your gifting light pushing her along. She is your everything and maybe one day a little one will catch her eye and will make her want to push them along as you did her. But until then taking baby steps is where we all start.
Very motivational piece.
Just one thing, make sure you proofread your poetry before you post it; you are making very minor mistakes, but mistakes nonetheless.
I agree with post 2 on all accounts. I'm also not sure if this is a poem or something entirely different. Good message, but like "fighter" a few tweeks could make your exicution much greater.
Thank you could have needed some work but I was venting when I wrote it.
agree with the posts. it's heavy though. and very true.